Friday, 30 January 2015

TOTAL HOURS

Total hours recorded = 86.5 hours

MY FIRST BULLETIN READS:

BUNDABERG



FRASER COAST



Friday, 23 January 2015

DAY 14

HOURS RECORDED: 
9am to 5pm (8 hours)

EVIDENCE:


Field Work: *ATTENDED AUSTRALIA DAY POLICE CONFERENCE AND CHINATOWN STATUE UNVEILING*

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Original:

POLICE will be out on the streets and beaches today targeting public drinking and nuisance.
342 police officers have been brought to the GOLD COAST to assist local authorities.
Water patrols will also be at the SPIT and the BROADWATER.

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Original:

GOLD COASTERS are being cautioned against drinking in public today.
POLICE will be out in force to crack down on public nuisance issues and RBTs will be on the roads.
Over 300 officers have been brought to the coast to help out for the day. 


Edited:


GOLD COASTERS are being cautioned against drinking in public today.

POLICE are out in force to cracking down on public nuisance with RBTs on the roads. 
Over 300 officers are on the coast to help out for the day. 

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Original:

As AUSTRALIA DAY celebrations begin police are preparing for a big day today.
Over 300 officers will be assisting local police as they crackdown on drink driving and public nuisance. 


Edited:


It's AUSTRALIA DAY and police are preparing for a big day. 

Over 300 officers are cracking down on drink driving and public nuisance.

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Original:

AUSTRALIA DAY recognises some outstanding members of the GOLD COAST community.
These locals have been recognised for their support and efforts within the community.
A few of the commended recipients include:
Mr CHRISTOPHER MADDEN for being an outstanding educator and mentor.
Mr ALAN BARLOW for his services to veterans.
...and... Ms JANICE BRADNAM for her community health services.


Edited:


Today rewards those in the GOLD COAST community who support and help others. 

A few local recipients include:
Mr CHRISTOPHER MADDEN for being an outstanding educator and mentor. 
Mr ALAN BARLOW for his services to veterans.
...and... Ms JANICE BRADNAM for her community health services.


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Original:

A number of GOLD COASTERs have shown off what being AUSTRALIAN is all about.
The Australia Day Honours list recognises these aussies for their outstanding contributions within the community.
Some of the lucky recipients include:
Mrs DESLEIGH BUTLER for her services to charities.
Mrs BERNADETTE LANE for her help with social welfare.
Ms SUSANNE MACDONALD for her service to SOUTHPORT Surf Life Saving.
...and... Mr PETER McGREGOR for his service to the BURLEIGH community.

Edited:


Some GOLD COASTERS have been rewards for their Aussie Spirit.

A number of locals have recieved awards for their contributions to the community:
Mrs DESLEIGH BUTLER for her services to charities. 
Mrs BERNADETTE LANE for her help with social welfare. 
Ms SUSANNE MACDONALD for her service to SOUTHPORT Surf Life Saving. 
...and... Mr PETER McGREGOR for his service to the BURLEIGH community.

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Original:

Today the 2015 Australia Day Honours list recognises local Aussie heroes.
These awards celebrate achievements professionally, in the community, in defence, emergency services and in acts of bravery.
A few of the commended recipients include:
Mr CHRISTOPHER MADDEN for being an outstanding educator and mentor.
Mr ALAN BARLOW for his services to veterans....and...
Ms JANICE BRADNAM for her community health services. 


Some GOLD COASTERs have made it on the Australia Day Honours list today:

The recipients include:
Mr CHRISTOPHER MADDEN for being an outstanding educator and mentor. 
Mr ALAN BARLOW for his services to veterans....and...
Ms JANICE BRADNAM for her community health services. 

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Original:

The Australia Day Honours List has been released recognising individuals for their efforts-- professionally, within the community , in defence and emergency services and acts of bravery.
Some of the lucky recipients include:
Mrs DESLEIGH BUTLER for her service to charities.
Mrs BERNADETTE LANE for her help with social welfare.
Ms SUSANNE MACDONALD for her service to SOUTHPORT Surf Life Saving.
...and...Mr PETER McGREGOR for his service to the BURLEIGH community.

Wednesday, 21 January 2015

DAY 13

HOURS RECORDED: 
9am to 5pm (8 hours)

EVIDENCE:

Field Work: *INDIVIDUAL WORK FOR TAFE OPENING AND MAYOR PARKING STORIES*


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Original:


THE GOLD COAST CITY COUNCIL launched a new paid parking app today that allows GOLD COASTERs to park with ease.
Mayor Tate says the app allows you to pay as you go...

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Edited:


The GOLD COAST CITY COUNCIL launched a new paid parking app today allowing locals to park with ease. 

Mayor Tate says the app allows you to pay as you go...
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Original:


The GOLD COAST CITY COUNCIL today released an app that makes paid parking an ease.
Drivers can now download the PAYSTAY mobile app on a smart phone and pay with one touch.
MAYOR TATE says parking inspectors will have time to focus on other parking issues...

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Edited:


Today the GOLD COAST CITY COUNCIL released an app to make parking easy. 

Drivers can now download the PAYSTAY mobile app on a smart phone and pay with one touch. 
MAYOR TATE says parking inspectors can now focus on other issues...
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Original:


GOLD COASTER's will have to keep up with the times -- parking meters make way for a new parking app.
The app will allow drivers to pay for only the time stay in a parking spot.
MAYOR TATE says the new system will decrease revenue -- but benefit the public...

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Original:

A 6 million dollar TAFE has opened in Southport -- featuring new technology and modern facilities.
The capacity of the TAFE has now doubled to hold up to 10,000 students.
EDUCATION MINISTER JOHN-PAUL LANGBROEK says young Queenslanders will have more opportunities...

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Edited:


Southport has welcomed the opening of a 6 million dollar TAFE - featuring new technology and modern facilities. 

It's capacity has also doubled -- holding up to 10 thousand students.
EDUCATION MINISTER JOHN-PAUL LANGBROEK says students will have more opportunities...
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Original:

SOUTHPORT TAFE has undergone a 6 million dollar makeover.
The new facility will cater for 10,000 students who aim further their studies.
EDUCATION MINISTER JOHN-PAUL LANGBROEK says technology will enhance education within the TAFE...

<GRAB>

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Original:


STUDENTS will be pleased to return to SOUTHPORT TAFE this semester following a 6 million dollar makeover.
The TAFE offers state-of-the-art facilities for 10,000 students.
TAFE QUEENSLAND MANAGER JENNY DODD says the outstanding staff compliment the new facilities...

<GRAB>

Edited:


SOUTHPORT TAFE Students will return to a 6 million dollar facility this semester.
The TAFE has undergone a full make-over - with a new capacity to hold 10 thousand students. 
TAFE QUEENSLAND MANAGER JENNY DODD says the outstanding staff compliment the new facilities...
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